Post by kito on Nov 23, 2010 0:00:32 GMT -5
hio all i have a few problems with a villan created by one of my Players. if you could look over the villan and tell me wut i cant seem to see i would really like it. wut im looking for is y he seams so op he has been mached agenst manny heros and alway seams to come out with an easy win. he has fought wolverend all the avengers and hulk and wins idk if it is all his clever tatics or just some op thing im not seeing plz any help would be nice.
Villan: Arakneous
Created by: Zak age 16
Name:Arakneous Secret identety: N/A
Species: Mutent Gender: Male
Hair: Redish(like red mixed with orange) Eyes: Glowing Red
Height: 6foot Weight:600 lbs
Int:8
Str:3
Adg:3
Speed:3
Dur:5
Hp:5
Energy:15
Cost 21 w
Actions:
Close Combat 6
Wep or Tendril Mod
Ranged Combat 6
Wep or Tendril Mod
Consintration 6
int bonous
Genetic Engenearing 10
-must use with outher action
-Cant be inprouved by lines
General Knolage 5
- Must use with outher action/mod
Social Skills 3
-Must use with outher action/mod
Tendril Combat 8
-has 6 tendrils max range of 2
-retractibull/extendibul +1
-can combin with close or ranged combat or wep mod
Tendral have 1 w hp stone
tendril str= 5
2 tendril =6
4 tendril = 7
6 tendril = 8
tendril all user to move at speed of 5.
Action total cost 45w
Modifiers
Adamantom Skeleton
Claw (+3) in tendril only give armor pen from adamatiom suronding the bony tips
Tuffness (3) to tendril only
defence Mental (8) gave at discount for being crazy on discont of
-1 to lvl
healing factor accelerator
extended life
wealth -1
Mod total cost= 34w
Challenges
Being a mutant 3w
Blames "society" and others for situation 1w
Chronic disease or condition (Canser cases heling factor to take 1w/3pan insted of 2) 3w (even tho his canser is now gone he is alway fighting a new diseas)
Compulsion to stick up for the underdog 3w (beaing anything from a cat in a tree to even the guy he is beating up he has even fought himself in order to save a homeless man he was gona rob)
Conflicting interests 3w (he is alway conflited is he rilly a villan or is he a hero that the world rilly needs or is he a god or is he a 10 year old school girl who has lost her mind)
Deadly enemies 5w (hydra but he doesent know they are out to get him but they do so i counted it)
Disliked and shunned by peers 2w ( he hates himself and becaus of his mental problems has made fun of beating or generaly been a dick to every 1 he has met)
Extreme vanity 2w (beleaves he is god whenever he looks at himself alway wheres a mask becaus no 1 is wothey enouf to see his face)
Guilty conscience 2w ( guilty about every evil action he does has to over justify doing them manny times befor he actualy does somthing evil)
Haunted past 3w ( this was verry long almost 3 pages long but to sum it up he was a mutant who at beath riped out of his mouthers uteris. his father seing him as a monster shot him hin the head and left him in the sewer. he was later foun by the morlocks. when gambet and the rest attaced the morlock he was "killed" and fell deep into the sewers. was discoverd by hydra and given and adimantom skeletion and trained to use his powers for assinating. before his actual project compleation he was distroyed for new x-23 project. survied and made his way back to the serfes. was disoverd by a Briliant gentic enginear who worked for the kingpin. trained under him for years untill he started to get headaches. was digenosd with canser. had a tumer in his brain. in desperation shot the tumer out threw his eye. survived but with major mential disibility and no knolage of his past.)
Legacy virus 10w
Looking non-human 4w (redish hair glowing red eyes big black armor coverd tendrils coming out of back)
Major psychological restriction 5w (M.P.S Detachment from reality.
Skistofranick. and uncontroillable urges to kill)
Psychological; per symptom 3w (temper. Depresion. Vengfull)
Scared of opposite sex 1w (Beleaves they have cooties)
Weak immune system 5w (when his body is not fighting the canser he alway seams to have a new deseas he has goten and cured the black plage foot rot and some thing that tunred his tong blu)
Won't/can't go certain places 2w (will not enter a church because they made the status oh him wrong. will not fly because it is bad for your dog) also does not have a dog)
Won't fly 1w (dog thing again)
Challanges total 58w
Villan total cost 40w
He dose play his villan insanly well and it is alway fun to watch him struggle threw he based him of his 2 favorit marvel heros Deadpool and Docter octopous.
Any way he wants to be the major villan of a different group that plays as he is ther friend and all but i think his villan might just be to strong for them to handel.
so is this villan just made verry well or is he just op and i missed somthing?
also forgot he has challange of Extram Elemental sensitivity x4 to megnetic but does not rember it yet.
Villan: Arakneous
Created by: Zak age 16
Name:Arakneous Secret identety: N/A
Species: Mutent Gender: Male
Hair: Redish(like red mixed with orange) Eyes: Glowing Red
Height: 6foot Weight:600 lbs
Int:8
Str:3
Adg:3
Speed:3
Dur:5
Hp:5
Energy:15
Cost 21 w
Actions:
Close Combat 6
Wep or Tendril Mod
Ranged Combat 6
Wep or Tendril Mod
Consintration 6
int bonous
Genetic Engenearing 10
-must use with outher action
-Cant be inprouved by lines
General Knolage 5
- Must use with outher action/mod
Social Skills 3
-Must use with outher action/mod
Tendril Combat 8
-has 6 tendrils max range of 2
-retractibull/extendibul +1
-can combin with close or ranged combat or wep mod
Tendral have 1 w hp stone
tendril str= 5
2 tendril =6
4 tendril = 7
6 tendril = 8
tendril all user to move at speed of 5.
Action total cost 45w
Modifiers
Adamantom Skeleton
Claw (+3) in tendril only give armor pen from adamatiom suronding the bony tips
Tuffness (3) to tendril only
defence Mental (8) gave at discount for being crazy on discont of
-1 to lvl
healing factor accelerator
extended life
wealth -1
Mod total cost= 34w
Challenges
Being a mutant 3w
Blames "society" and others for situation 1w
Chronic disease or condition (Canser cases heling factor to take 1w/3pan insted of 2) 3w (even tho his canser is now gone he is alway fighting a new diseas)
Compulsion to stick up for the underdog 3w (beaing anything from a cat in a tree to even the guy he is beating up he has even fought himself in order to save a homeless man he was gona rob)
Conflicting interests 3w (he is alway conflited is he rilly a villan or is he a hero that the world rilly needs or is he a god or is he a 10 year old school girl who has lost her mind)
Deadly enemies 5w (hydra but he doesent know they are out to get him but they do so i counted it)
Disliked and shunned by peers 2w ( he hates himself and becaus of his mental problems has made fun of beating or generaly been a dick to every 1 he has met)
Extreme vanity 2w (beleaves he is god whenever he looks at himself alway wheres a mask becaus no 1 is wothey enouf to see his face)
Guilty conscience 2w ( guilty about every evil action he does has to over justify doing them manny times befor he actualy does somthing evil)
Haunted past 3w ( this was verry long almost 3 pages long but to sum it up he was a mutant who at beath riped out of his mouthers uteris. his father seing him as a monster shot him hin the head and left him in the sewer. he was later foun by the morlocks. when gambet and the rest attaced the morlock he was "killed" and fell deep into the sewers. was discoverd by hydra and given and adimantom skeletion and trained to use his powers for assinating. before his actual project compleation he was distroyed for new x-23 project. survied and made his way back to the serfes. was disoverd by a Briliant gentic enginear who worked for the kingpin. trained under him for years untill he started to get headaches. was digenosd with canser. had a tumer in his brain. in desperation shot the tumer out threw his eye. survived but with major mential disibility and no knolage of his past.)
Legacy virus 10w
Looking non-human 4w (redish hair glowing red eyes big black armor coverd tendrils coming out of back)
Major psychological restriction 5w (M.P.S Detachment from reality.
Skistofranick. and uncontroillable urges to kill)
Psychological; per symptom 3w (temper. Depresion. Vengfull)
Scared of opposite sex 1w (Beleaves they have cooties)
Weak immune system 5w (when his body is not fighting the canser he alway seams to have a new deseas he has goten and cured the black plage foot rot and some thing that tunred his tong blu)
Won't/can't go certain places 2w (will not enter a church because they made the status oh him wrong. will not fly because it is bad for your dog) also does not have a dog)
Won't fly 1w (dog thing again)
Challanges total 58w
Villan total cost 40w
He dose play his villan insanly well and it is alway fun to watch him struggle threw he based him of his 2 favorit marvel heros Deadpool and Docter octopous.
Any way he wants to be the major villan of a different group that plays as he is ther friend and all but i think his villan might just be to strong for them to handel.
so is this villan just made verry well or is he just op and i missed somthing?
also forgot he has challange of Extram Elemental sensitivity x4 to megnetic but does not rember it yet.