Post by l3eta-00a1x on Jul 12, 2010 14:15:52 GMT -5
I haven't made to many characters, so I hope you like-y! This first one I submitted for EIH, so I posted it here, in case he doesn't make the cut
Name: Beta
Identity: Beta
Species: Unknown
Gender: Male
Hair: None
Eyes: Blood Red
Height: [7' 5"]
Weight: [425 lbs.]
ABILITIES
----------
Int: 2
Str: 4
Agi: 2
Spd: 2
Dur: 5
Health: 5
Energy: 15
COST:13W
ACTIONS
----------
]Combat, Close
AN:3 COST:4W
~Strength Bonus
~Armor Piercing
~Eviseration
~Body-Weapons
~Wilderness (Using surroundings to his advantage)
]Flight +2
AN:3 COST:1W
~Bought with Mastery of Electricity (-1CL)
~Can't be Improved (-1CL)
]Mastery of Fire
AN:4 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Force Blast (Mouth) (+1CL)
. ~2X Damage
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
]Mastery of Electricity
AN:2 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Force Blast (Anywhere) (+1CL)
. ~2X Damage
~Accumulate Energy (+2CL)
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
~Bought with Flight
COST:13W
MODIFIERS
----------
Armor Penetration N/A N/A
Body Spikes (Claws) MN:5 COST:12W
. ~Takes one panel to extend out of body (If in body) (-1CL)
. ~Extendable/Retractable (from in body to maximum 2 feet) (+1CL)
Toughness MN:4 COST:12W
. ~Nullifies Armor Penetration/2X Damage (+2CL)
COST:24W
CHALLENGES
----------
Non-Human Appearance COST:-4W
Haunted Past (Being a test subject/Killing other test subjects (Alpha, Gamma, and Delta so far)):-3W
Deadly Enemies (The other test subjects, as only one can survive. They are programmed/created to kill each other no matter the consequences.):-3W
COST:-10W
----------
TOTAL COST:40+10W
----------
DESCRIPTION:
rivendell.fortunecity.com/obsidian/10/draconian.jpg
Take that, and remove the armor.
Also add one large rhino horn in the center of his head, and two bull-ish horns on the sides of his head (Near the others) (Retractable, part of Claws).
The Claws are on the following places (He's got lots. There's no gameplay advantage, just flavor).
-On his/insted of fingernails (shorter than rest, similar to what you'd see on a wild animal).
-Between his fingers (Think Wolverine).
-Sticking out from his elbows (Even when out, they mold into his skin when his arms are straight).
-On his shoulders (Like pointed shoulderpads).
-On the knees (Like if you tied a large knife onto your lower leg. Molds to upper leg like elbow spikes).
-Talons on his feet, with one facing backwards (Similar to a Velociraptor).
-Finally, he has a row of spikes down his back/neck that are on his vetebre.
Now I've got a more up-to-date version, with some changes, and a bio...
Name: Beta
Identity: Beta
Species: Unknown
Gender: Male
Hair: None
Eyes: Blood Red
Height: [7' 5"]
Weight: [425 lbs.]
ABILITIES
----------
Int: 3
Str: 4
Agi: 2
Spd: 2
Dur: 5
Health: 5
Energy: 15
COST:13W1r
ACTIONS
----------
]Combat, Close
AN:3 COST:1W
~Strength Bonus
~Eviseration
~Body-Weapons
~Wilderness (Using surroundings to his advantage)
]Flight +2
AN:2 COST:1W
~Bought with Mastery of Electricity (-1CL)
]Growth +2
AN:1 COST:1W
]Mastery of Fire
AN:4 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Force Blast (Mouth) (+1CL)
. ~2X Damage
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
]Mastery of Electricity
AN:2 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Create/Manipulate (+1CL)
~Accumulate Energy (+2CL)
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
~Bought with Flight
COST:11W
MODIFIERS
----------
Body Spikes (Claws) MN:1 COST:9W
. ~Takes one panel to extend out of body (If in body) (-1CL)
. ~Extendable/Retractable (from in body to maximum 2 feet) (+1CL)
. ~Armor Penetration (+3CL)
Toughness MN:4 COST:12W
. ~Nullifies Armor Penetration/2X Damage (+2CL)
Extended Life (Thousands of years) COST:3W
Self Contained Lifeform COST:1W2r
. ~Not entirly self contained. He still needs food, drink, and air. But he can go years without food, months without drink, and weeks without air. (Approx. 4-6 years, 2-10 months, and 6 weeks)
COST:25W2r
CHALLENGES
----------
Non-Human Appearance COST:-4W
Haunted Past (Being a test subject/Killing other test subjects (Alpha, Gamma, and Delta so far)):-3W
Deadly Enemies (The other test subjects, as only one can survive. They are programmed/created to kill each other no matter the consequences.):-3W
COST:-10W
----------
TOTAL COST:40+10W
----------
DESCRIPTION:
rivendell.fortunecity.com/obsidian/10/draconian.jpg
Take that, and remove the armor.
Also add one large rhino horn in the center of his head, and two bull-ish horns on the sides of his head (Near the others) (Retractable, part of Claws).
The Claws are on the following places (He's got lots. There's no gameplay advantage, just flavor).
-On his/insted of fingernails (shorter than rest, similar to what you'd see on a wild animal).
-Between his fingers (Think Wolverine).
-Sticking out from his elbows (Even when out, they mold into his skin when his arms are straight).
-On his shoulders (Like pointed shoulderpads).
-On the knees (Like if you tied a large knife onto your lower leg. Molds to upper leg like elbow spikes).
-Talons on his feet, with one facing backwards (Similar to a Velociraptor).
-Finally, he has a row of spikes down his back/neck that are on his vetebre.
Bio: Beta was a test subject, who knows nothing of his past. He believes himself to be a human, who was genetically engineered to be superior, based off of records he has found after killing his fellow test subjects. His first absolute memories, are of killing Alpha, a shape-shifting telepath, with no actual shape. He managed to escape, by slaughtering most of the lab, and made it to a city. There he was shunned, and considered a freak, until the lab picked him back up, and continued experimenting on him. After killing a clone of himself (which he still doubts was a clone. He believes himself to be a clone, which worsened his already fragile self-esteem,) he was implanted with a "suggestion" that he need s to kill all the other test subjects, to prove himself superior. He killed Gamma during this time, before being brought in by SHIELD, to be imprisoned, so he could no longer kill. Through therapy, the "suggestion" lessened, but it could not be removed. After years of imprisonment, he was finally released into a world that fears and hates him, not to mention the pressure of being thought of as a mutant freak by most. Years later, after becoming accustomed to his life in seclusion, a knock came on his door. He opened it, only to be immediately assaulted by Subject Delta. After killing yet another test subject, Beta's fragile mind broke down. He spent yet more years in an Insane Asylum, eventually being broken out by a gang of villains to be used as a weapon. After this his memories become fuzzy and irregular, until he found himself in a blank room, with the corpses of his "teammates" beside him, and a piece of paper that said one word, "Epsilon". Beta knows that eventually Epsilon will show up, and than the next, and than the next, and the only thing that keeps him from descending back into insanity, is the knowledge that if he is careful, another subject should take a long time to arrive.
Now Beta is a hero, trying to repent for the deaths he has caused, and those he knows will follow eventually. He has become more friendly and open, and his mental condition has returned to normal. He hopes that if another subject ever does come, he will be controlled enough to let it live, and only subdue it. He knows he will never be a regular member of society, but he hopes if he can find more heroes like himself, he will feel more welcome. Even though he is strong and large, he is often shy, and prefers not to be the center of attention for prolonged periods. He doesn't function well under stressful conditions, and fears that he will eventually return to his old ways...
Name: Beta
Identity: Beta
Species: Unknown
Gender: Male
Hair: None
Eyes: Blood Red
Height: [7' 5"]
Weight: [425 lbs.]
ABILITIES
----------
Int: 2
Str: 4
Agi: 2
Spd: 2
Dur: 5
Health: 5
Energy: 15
COST:13W
ACTIONS
----------
]Combat, Close
AN:3 COST:4W
~Strength Bonus
~Armor Piercing
~Eviseration
~Body-Weapons
~Wilderness (Using surroundings to his advantage)
]Flight +2
AN:3 COST:1W
~Bought with Mastery of Electricity (-1CL)
~Can't be Improved (-1CL)
]Mastery of Fire
AN:4 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Force Blast (Mouth) (+1CL)
. ~2X Damage
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
]Mastery of Electricity
AN:2 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Force Blast (Anywhere) (+1CL)
. ~2X Damage
~Accumulate Energy (+2CL)
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
~Bought with Flight
COST:13W
MODIFIERS
----------
Armor Penetration N/A N/A
Body Spikes (Claws) MN:5 COST:12W
. ~Takes one panel to extend out of body (If in body) (-1CL)
. ~Extendable/Retractable (from in body to maximum 2 feet) (+1CL)
Toughness MN:4 COST:12W
. ~Nullifies Armor Penetration/2X Damage (+2CL)
COST:24W
CHALLENGES
----------
Non-Human Appearance COST:-4W
Haunted Past (Being a test subject/Killing other test subjects (Alpha, Gamma, and Delta so far)):-3W
Deadly Enemies (The other test subjects, as only one can survive. They are programmed/created to kill each other no matter the consequences.):-3W
COST:-10W
----------
TOTAL COST:40+10W
----------
DESCRIPTION:
rivendell.fortunecity.com/obsidian/10/draconian.jpg
Take that, and remove the armor.
Also add one large rhino horn in the center of his head, and two bull-ish horns on the sides of his head (Near the others) (Retractable, part of Claws).
The Claws are on the following places (He's got lots. There's no gameplay advantage, just flavor).
-On his/insted of fingernails (shorter than rest, similar to what you'd see on a wild animal).
-Between his fingers (Think Wolverine).
-Sticking out from his elbows (Even when out, they mold into his skin when his arms are straight).
-On his shoulders (Like pointed shoulderpads).
-On the knees (Like if you tied a large knife onto your lower leg. Molds to upper leg like elbow spikes).
-Talons on his feet, with one facing backwards (Similar to a Velociraptor).
-Finally, he has a row of spikes down his back/neck that are on his vetebre.
Now I've got a more up-to-date version, with some changes, and a bio...
Name: Beta
Identity: Beta
Species: Unknown
Gender: Male
Hair: None
Eyes: Blood Red
Height: [7' 5"]
Weight: [425 lbs.]
ABILITIES
----------
Int: 3
Str: 4
Agi: 2
Spd: 2
Dur: 5
Health: 5
Energy: 15
COST:13W1r
ACTIONS
----------
]Combat, Close
AN:3 COST:1W
~Strength Bonus
~Eviseration
~Body-Weapons
~Wilderness (Using surroundings to his advantage)
]Flight +2
AN:2 COST:1W
~Bought with Mastery of Electricity (-1CL)
]Growth +2
AN:1 COST:1W
]Mastery of Fire
AN:4 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Force Blast (Mouth) (+1CL)
. ~2X Damage
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
]Mastery of Electricity
AN:2 COST:4W
~Immunity (+1CL)
~Transform (+1CL)
~Create/Manipulate (+1CL)
~Accumulate Energy (+2CL)
~Automatically causes Collateral Damage (-1CL)
~Bought with Flight
COST:11W
MODIFIERS
----------
Body Spikes (Claws) MN:1 COST:9W
. ~Takes one panel to extend out of body (If in body) (-1CL)
. ~Extendable/Retractable (from in body to maximum 2 feet) (+1CL)
. ~Armor Penetration (+3CL)
Toughness MN:4 COST:12W
. ~Nullifies Armor Penetration/2X Damage (+2CL)
Extended Life (Thousands of years) COST:3W
Self Contained Lifeform COST:1W2r
. ~Not entirly self contained. He still needs food, drink, and air. But he can go years without food, months without drink, and weeks without air. (Approx. 4-6 years, 2-10 months, and 6 weeks)
COST:25W2r
CHALLENGES
----------
Non-Human Appearance COST:-4W
Haunted Past (Being a test subject/Killing other test subjects (Alpha, Gamma, and Delta so far)):-3W
Deadly Enemies (The other test subjects, as only one can survive. They are programmed/created to kill each other no matter the consequences.):-3W
COST:-10W
----------
TOTAL COST:40+10W
----------
DESCRIPTION:
rivendell.fortunecity.com/obsidian/10/draconian.jpg
Take that, and remove the armor.
Also add one large rhino horn in the center of his head, and two bull-ish horns on the sides of his head (Near the others) (Retractable, part of Claws).
The Claws are on the following places (He's got lots. There's no gameplay advantage, just flavor).
-On his/insted of fingernails (shorter than rest, similar to what you'd see on a wild animal).
-Between his fingers (Think Wolverine).
-Sticking out from his elbows (Even when out, they mold into his skin when his arms are straight).
-On his shoulders (Like pointed shoulderpads).
-On the knees (Like if you tied a large knife onto your lower leg. Molds to upper leg like elbow spikes).
-Talons on his feet, with one facing backwards (Similar to a Velociraptor).
-Finally, he has a row of spikes down his back/neck that are on his vetebre.
Bio: Beta was a test subject, who knows nothing of his past. He believes himself to be a human, who was genetically engineered to be superior, based off of records he has found after killing his fellow test subjects. His first absolute memories, are of killing Alpha, a shape-shifting telepath, with no actual shape. He managed to escape, by slaughtering most of the lab, and made it to a city. There he was shunned, and considered a freak, until the lab picked him back up, and continued experimenting on him. After killing a clone of himself (which he still doubts was a clone. He believes himself to be a clone, which worsened his already fragile self-esteem,) he was implanted with a "suggestion" that he need s to kill all the other test subjects, to prove himself superior. He killed Gamma during this time, before being brought in by SHIELD, to be imprisoned, so he could no longer kill. Through therapy, the "suggestion" lessened, but it could not be removed. After years of imprisonment, he was finally released into a world that fears and hates him, not to mention the pressure of being thought of as a mutant freak by most. Years later, after becoming accustomed to his life in seclusion, a knock came on his door. He opened it, only to be immediately assaulted by Subject Delta. After killing yet another test subject, Beta's fragile mind broke down. He spent yet more years in an Insane Asylum, eventually being broken out by a gang of villains to be used as a weapon. After this his memories become fuzzy and irregular, until he found himself in a blank room, with the corpses of his "teammates" beside him, and a piece of paper that said one word, "Epsilon". Beta knows that eventually Epsilon will show up, and than the next, and than the next, and the only thing that keeps him from descending back into insanity, is the knowledge that if he is careful, another subject should take a long time to arrive.
Now Beta is a hero, trying to repent for the deaths he has caused, and those he knows will follow eventually. He has become more friendly and open, and his mental condition has returned to normal. He hopes that if another subject ever does come, he will be controlled enough to let it live, and only subdue it. He knows he will never be a regular member of society, but he hopes if he can find more heroes like himself, he will feel more welcome. Even though he is strong and large, he is often shy, and prefers not to be the center of attention for prolonged periods. He doesn't function well under stressful conditions, and fears that he will eventually return to his old ways...