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Shriek
Apr 2, 2007 23:35:07 GMT -5
Post by Kaimontfendo on Apr 2, 2007 23:35:07 GMT -5
I figured I'd do something special for my 400th post. Thusly, I decided to post my first attempt at building one of the Marvel Characters. And so I now present to you, without further ado, my first decent attempt at making Shriek!
Character: Shriek Real Name: Francis Louise Barrison Species: Mutant Hair: Black Eyes: Blue
ABILITIES Intelligence 3 Strength 4 Agility 3 Speed 2 Durability 4
ACTIONS Close Combat: 2 [Agility Bonus or Weapon Modifier]
Ranged Combat: 1 [Weapon Modifier]
Telepathy: 8 -CANNOT READ MINDS +Can sense, manipulate, and project negative emotions, including anger, fear, hatred, and hopelessness.
Telekinesis/Flight: 3
Sonic Blast: 6
Social Skills: 3 -Rock Music Culture -Drug Culture -Ravencroft Culture
MODIFIERS Mutant: Chalk-white skin, Diamond-shaped scar around left eye, Left eye also glows when she uses her powers Mental Defense: 8
NOTES: I'm not terribly familiar with her, so I mostly pieced her stats together from online bios. I tried to make sure I didn't include anything unless several sources agreed on it. Responses are more than welcome.
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Shriek
Apr 30, 2007 2:22:57 GMT -5
Post by Kaimontfendo on Apr 30, 2007 2:22:57 GMT -5
I made a few minor edits.
Also, I'm kinda surprised that with over 30 views, I still haven't gotten any feedback. Seriously, doesn't anyone have anything to say about this write-up?
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Shriek
Apr 30, 2007 9:30:11 GMT -5
Post by malice on Apr 30, 2007 9:30:11 GMT -5
Half the write-ups never get responses. I think a little more detail on the sonic blast could be helpful. Can she attack vs. durability or do 2x? What?
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Shriek
Apr 30, 2007 10:55:28 GMT -5
Post by Kaimontfendo on Apr 30, 2007 10:55:28 GMT -5
Well, I've strongly considered giving her force blasts damage or stun at will, but I haven't felt like that was well-justified.
I very briefly considered double damage, but I know she's battled Venom before, and since symbiotes have sonic vulnerability, he'd probably die from a decent blast or two.
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Shriek
Apr 30, 2007 11:29:01 GMT -5
Post by GhostKnight on Apr 30, 2007 11:29:01 GMT -5
What I know of her is from the game "Maximum Carnage" and I say that she might have a limited flight option propelling herself with her force blast.
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