A newbies first try!

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ABILITIES (14w)

Int 3/1

Str 3/1

Agi 5/3

Spd 5/3

Dur 4/6

Health: 4

Energy 9

Regen 3


ACTIONS 20w

Acrobatics 2

+ Agility Bonus (actions only)

+ Free option, Ability Bonus

-Action/Modifier doesn't help friends

Combat- Ranged 4

+ 2x Damage

+ Free option, Ability bonus
+ Works at increased range

- One target only

-Stones can't be split between attack/defense

Ninja 2

+ 2x damage

+ Armor penetration
+ Free Ability Bonus

-One target only

-Only through other Action

MODIFIERS 16w

Reflexive Dodge 4

-One target only

Targeting 1

+ x3 damage

EQUIPMENT 6w

Shuriken 1: A pair of four pronged, standard steel shurikens. She keeps roughly 30 of them on her at all times across a bandelear, concealed in various spots around her body, and on bigger missions in a large backpack.

+ x2 damage

+ armor penetration

+ Works at increased range

CHALLENGES 6w

Deadly Enemies 4: Shuriken is a streetlevel vigilante who's turned the heads of some very powerful supervillians and crime lords alike. The local yakuza knows Shuriken well, as her intervention with a dangerous biker gang caused a deadly misunderstanding between them. They have since then teamed up to take Shuriken down. Yakuza hitmen, hired mutants and the occasional supervillian such as Tombstone or Silvermane have all given Shuriken a run for her money. She's learned that she can't fight all these battles on her own, and there is a time and place where running is wise.

Prying Relatives, Friends, Associates 2: Admittedly, Chie's college dorm mates are surprisingly unquestioning of her absences and cheap excuses. It's her friends and family that cause her the most grief. Chie has managed to keep her dangerous past time a secret from her family, a fact her mother would be furious to hear about an ex S.H.E.I.L.D. Agent. Her friends seem to have a more innocent curiosity, concerned for the strange habits of an old pal. Both sides could put themselves at risk if they ever got themselves woven into her nightlife. Chie's mother particularly is a good snoop, after years of sneaking.

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Name: Chie Jordan
Hero Name: Shuriken
Known Alias':
Age: 19
Bio: Kyoko, Chie's mother, was once an agent of S.H.E.I.L.D. and went on many missions through the eighties. When Loki and his army attacked, however, Kyoko was wounded and in critical condition by a frost giant. She recovered, but the event left Kyoko unable to fight. S.H.E.I.L.D. awarded her a purple heart and Kyoko was forced into early retirement. She met a man and settled down in toronto where they raised two kids. As her kids grew up, Kyoko taught them the same martial arts she had learned throughout her life, as her kids seem to idolize her for being a hero.

Chie spent most of her childhood in Toronto as a relatively normal girl. She was sporty and close with her family, a good student, and had plenty of friends. She flocked to her mother's lessons and always pushed herself to be better than her older brother. When her brother moved out, her father took a new job in new york city and the family moved. Chie resented her new home and her mother, fearful of having a beautiful young girl living on the streets of manhattan, Kyoko doubled down on Chie's training. Chie had a few encounters with local thugs and was surprised that her mother had taught her to capably handle them. Emboldened and angry at new living conditions, she took to the streets to save others who couldn't protect themselves as she could.

Over time Chie's vigilante work expanded beyond beating up muggers and thugs and she started actively fighting the organized crime in the city. She adopted her mother's old persona as she owed her for teaching her everything she knows. Now, after learning about some other heroes nearby, Chie is hoping to advance her heroic life!



Known Associates:
Kyoko Jordan:

an ex-member of S.H.E.I.L.D. is now a woman enjoying her early retirement. A mother of two, Kyoko sometimes has to derive her attention amongst her family but Kyoko is Chie's role model and in many way's her Mentor. They are good friends and the teen angst expected between them is seemingly non-existent as they both respect and enjoy one another for who they are. Kyoko can sometimes be a bit overbearing though, pressuring her child and expecting greatness from her. She will always accept her daughter no matter her abilities, but she knows Chie is capable of a lot.

Doug Jordan:

father of two, Husband of Kyoko, and proud attorney is the law keeper in the house. He keeps strict rules in the house and is an orderly person. He loves his family, even though they often break his rules or cause him stress. He is a patient person, butsher shows his disapproval at almost anything. A tall and scary-looking man, he is secretly a sweet heart.

Derrick Jordan:

is Chie's older brother, soul confidant, and is currently studying at a university on the other side of the country in California. Derrick is a laid-back stoner and is considered the black sheep of the family. He constantly encourages Chie's more rebellious, free spirit and can be a jerk at times. Still, he would drop everything for his family.

The gal pals:

Chie's best friends at her high school make up her normal squad she hangs out with when she gets a chance. Laura is the tallest and graduated early. She works as a barista at a local coffee shop and is often trying to get Chie to join her in escapades. A sort of rival in swimming and track is heather, the tanned girl with short hair. She's prone to teasing and though the most mature of the group she tends to be condescending when she's helping others. Last, but certainly not least is the energetic sweetheart that is Chandra. Chie's first friend in New york and her closest friend, the two are like peas in a pod. Lately, though, because of chie's role a shuriken, they have started to distance themselves.

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Welcome to boards. We're not very active lately, but I'll try to give you at least some tips. I don't feel like grabbing my books, so I'm going by memory here.

You should have 12 energy and 4 regeneration.
Acrobatics already doesn't help friends.
Ranged Combat doesn't have a free ability bonus, but a weapon modifier.
Your character is going to be in so much trouble when she is ever faced with more than one opponent.
I think Ninja already has Ranged Combat baked into it, no need to take it twice.
I don't think 2x damage and 3x damage stack.

Maybe we can start a new game. Who knows. I feel like playing something.

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Good to not, I will go ahead and change things. Still definately new to this system myself so i greatly appreciate the help. If I don't need ranged combat, any suggestions for how to make my character do better against groups?