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Post by Dionon on Oct 4, 2009 22:45:40 GMT -5
Vellia nodded "Aye sir." She said, then said "That's really it by the way." She says waiting to be dismissed.
(Hey justice... I'm going to sound like an asshole for this, but can you be more clear in your posts? You know... put quotation marks when you speak... actually say what your doing... that kind of thing? Maybe spell out your words instead of using smaller derivatives like u and r. I know it sounds like I'm picking on you, but I'm not... I'm just having a hard time even following what you're doing, and I'd hate to sound like a bitch in character when I don't understand something you're saying and go "What the hell are you saying?")
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Post by comicfan on Oct 8, 2009 17:33:39 GMT -5
"Dismissed Lt. Colonel." Harris spoke, then grabbed a datapad, and started looking over it.
(I kinda have to agree with Dionon Justice009. This isn't a bashing, Just take a moment to look at how we're posting, and try to copy that. We type up what are characters are doing, and saying, then we reveal how many stones we're putting into actions.
Also I've adjusted the ships. They now have less Vehicle Damage, to make ship combat a little faster, Defense is boosted to make up for the small health, and ship's crew have been changed. there are now 1,231 Crew on the ship (6 Departments with 200 Enlisted men, and 5 Officers in each.))
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Post by justice009 on Oct 8, 2009 22:21:07 GMT -5
Captain Shepard continue to mointor the operation system checking for any anamolies (to hell wit ut guys , lol ah jk bt ok i try to keep up im new here, and trying to reach tht expert level u bt ty for the advice ^_^)
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Post by Dionon on Oct 9, 2009 5:07:31 GMT -5
"Aye sir." Vellia says before she returned to the Bridge "Captain Shepard... status report." She said sitting in the Captain's chair until he returns. While there she went over her own progress reports from the security teams on both ships.
Action: 5 stones in Intelligence to go over the Security reports on the two ships, making sure everything was nominal.
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Post by justice009 on Oct 12, 2009 14:29:44 GMT -5
Captain Shepard turn around and says "all the ship's systems at an acceptable level of power, except for the Hull integrity which was low from the earlier fight. "
Action 5 stone into technology to check up on the hull integrtiy
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Post by Cernunnos on Oct 13, 2009 0:27:58 GMT -5
(to hell wit ut guys , lol ah jk bt ok i try to keep up im new here, and trying to reach tht expert level u bt ty for the advice ^_^) OMG... my head hurt so much after trying to read that! Anyway. I should be posting tomorrow (later today technically).
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Post by justice009 on Oct 13, 2009 14:34:46 GMT -5
just ignore it for the time being lol
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Post by comicfan on Oct 15, 2009 21:55:26 GMT -5
Captain Shepard turn around and says "all the ship's systems at an acceptable level of power, except for the Hull integrity which was low from the earlier fight." Action 5 stone into technology to check up on the hull integrtiy Hull integrity was gradually rising as Engineering teams were working on repairs to the ship. Soon it would be ready for another battle. Harris sat behind his desk, looking at a computer terminal as he checked reports from border stations through out this particular area of Concordium space. He hadn't expected an Orc ship considering they were a bit further away from the border where they've been attacking. He also accessed the information on the planet they were heading to. The planet hadn't been attacked by the Orcs in at lest a few weeks. which was a good thing, as they were in need of supplies. He turned off the monitor, and grabbed a datapad as he lookedover the new Operations Officer's record.
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Post by Cernunnos on Oct 21, 2009 13:56:02 GMT -5
*Flashback*
Looking around Hanarr looked for confirmation.
“So… who alls going?”
*Now*
Hannar paced around the ship looking at it up and down.
“Why did I come? So much work to do.”
================================== ACTION: 4 stones into Intelligence to see what needs to be done on the ship.
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Post by Cernunnos on Dec 5, 2009 13:22:35 GMT -5
Dead?
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Post by comicfan on Dec 5, 2009 20:53:18 GMT -5
Yes for now I will be bringing it back later
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Post by Cernunnos on Dec 8, 2009 22:52:34 GMT -5
*Forcefully punches the ground*
"You finally really did it! You maniacs! You blew it up! GOD DAMN YOU!”
*Punches the ground again*
“GOD… DAMN YOU ALL… TO HELL!”
*The camera pans out and all fades to black*
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